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Do a lot of lurking around here so I thought I would finally post some of my work to get some feedback from the fine members here..........hope to see a different perspective since there is a lot of sci-fi fans here. Just got into bashing about 7-8 months ago so I am open to any and all opinions, crtitiques, and advice. Thanks for looking
This is just an intro. More pics to follow as soon as I have the rest of the group done (3 figures and one more vehicle). Hope the story helps to pull you in.
Will have more for the rest of the characters......they're all referred to in this first snippet. More pics very soon.
Please let me know if the story line works or even makes sense. Thanks
Noirmageddon 2030
Big Brother
"........Come to think of it, I'm not sure where that *******'s from. He just come riding up outta the wasteland one day on a banged up moto-kett draggin that ol' trailer of his..........dropped some nice coin in my lap. Who was I to keep him out of the city? Looked a damn sight better than the usual trash that shows up looking to get in. We ain't private, but we damned sure ain't lettin just anyone in. Last thing I need is one of them white suit VRF types showing up asking questions. Two more weeks till my promotion and off this damned wall.
Now we do get the occasional wanderer that thinks this is where paradise is supposed to be. If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the folks that pay to get through the gates to Nuevo Geddon don't pay for questions. They pay so you look the other way. I've worked this wall a long time.......I know real trouble when I see it. It's not like I turned a blind eye while some sand ferals crept in and spread their pestilence like what happened out at West Gate or that time Winkle fell asleep and them three crazies from the asylum made off with that gear from the museum.
All things considered, he looked to be almost clean.....too clean to be trouble. Hell, I didn't get so much as a click from the geiger, and that's something. He didn't say word one though, like being clear of any trace of radiation is normal. Smooth character but rough at the same time.........no what I mean? Just nodded and went about his business.
Now I hear a rumor bout how Talbot out on South Gate came into a nice bit of scratch. So I catch up to ol Talbot at Central one day. He tells me bout some citizen he ain't never seen before coming out to meet two rough types. Masked men he called em. Like they was banditos from them old stories. Says the man dropped a note and some coin on him, so he lets em pass. Told me the two masked guys gave him the willies sumthin bad. Says the moved and sounded kinda funny. I guess
one of em looked his way and he dammed near pissed himself. Said whatever it was they was speaking, wasn't no language he ever heard before.....only thing he could make out was 'big brother'.
So I ask him what the note said, he tells me........... "no trouble."
Stan Garv
1st shift
North Gate
Senior Wall Jockey
Another figure and bike. A little bit of cussing here so skip to the figures if a couple of f-bombs offends ya.
What can I say? You see a white uniform and you know you're ^^^^ed. They must of thought of that when they chose em. Even their name is meant to to intimidate. VRF......violent response force. Can't imagine trying to keep them ^^^^s looking half way white around here. It's not so much the blue lights and sirens, that just makes you turn to look. It's that white ^^^^ing uniform that hits you like a spot light. You don't really worry when a brown or a grey shows up. You can talk or bribe your way out of that........................ but you see that white uniform cutting through the dirt and filth of this city and ya just freeze and start trying to think of anything you might of done wrong. Cause you know when they show up there ain't gonna be no questions. You better startvspittin out confessions or you'll be spittin out teeth, either way you're ^^^^ed.
Law Assurance officers are a joke. Even their brown uniforms reminds you of ^^^^. They're glorified Gate Jockeys that got promoted off the wall and handed a bigger stick. Fat ^^^^ers, can't find one of em without a large order of burger dumplings. Them Filipinos out by West Gate are making a killing......rob that place, and you might see some justice handed down. Hell, it don't take much to bribe a regular LA officer....guess that's why they brought in the Greys.
Greys are a harder lot, some call 'em Tunnel Hounds. They were what used to be the "elite" troops. I guess you gotta be a hard son of a ^^^^^ to go creepin around the underground in that ^^^^ing maze of old transit tubes and sewers. No telling whats still buried down there in the old city. You hardly see those guys around though. they're too busy sniffin out the ferals living in that ^^^^ or the trash trying to find another way into the city.
Wasn't till those loonies out the west gate hooked up with that trio of wanna-be intellectual terrorists that real trouble started. Use to be you'd find the occasional skirmish inside the gates, but once they got organized it all changed. i mean ^^^^-hit-the-fan. the city got bad. Central decided there were no more rules when it came to dealing with trouble. Guess it was bound to happen. Only so much ^^^^ can go down before somethings snaps. Next thing ya know there's these white suited para military types tearin ass through the city on the craziest looking bikes I've ever seen. Some crazy stuff straight out of the old days. Not one of em looks the same. We haven't seen that kind of science 'round here since the big war. some real fancy tech. if you ask me they got some something going on in that big ass building with all those guards around it that you ain't suppose to see out the South Gate.
I'll tell you this, whatever kinda tech they got, i bet i know how they get it. ^^^^s got the Brother's Grime written all over it.
Boogs
South Wall Area
street dealer
This is just an intro. More pics to follow as soon as I have the rest of the group done (3 figures and one more vehicle). Hope the story helps to pull you in.
Will have more for the rest of the characters......they're all referred to in this first snippet. More pics very soon.
Please let me know if the story line works or even makes sense. Thanks
Noirmageddon 2030
Big Brother
"........Come to think of it, I'm not sure where that *******'s from. He just come riding up outta the wasteland one day on a banged up moto-kett draggin that ol' trailer of his..........dropped some nice coin in my lap. Who was I to keep him out of the city? Looked a damn sight better than the usual trash that shows up looking to get in. We ain't private, but we damned sure ain't lettin just anyone in. Last thing I need is one of them white suit VRF types showing up asking questions. Two more weeks till my promotion and off this damned wall.
Now we do get the occasional wanderer that thinks this is where paradise is supposed to be. If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the folks that pay to get through the gates to Nuevo Geddon don't pay for questions. They pay so you look the other way. I've worked this wall a long time.......I know real trouble when I see it. It's not like I turned a blind eye while some sand ferals crept in and spread their pestilence like what happened out at West Gate or that time Winkle fell asleep and them three crazies from the asylum made off with that gear from the museum.
All things considered, he looked to be almost clean.....too clean to be trouble. Hell, I didn't get so much as a click from the geiger, and that's something. He didn't say word one though, like being clear of any trace of radiation is normal. Smooth character but rough at the same time.........no what I mean? Just nodded and went about his business.
Now I hear a rumor bout how Talbot out on South Gate came into a nice bit of scratch. So I catch up to ol Talbot at Central one day. He tells me bout some citizen he ain't never seen before coming out to meet two rough types. Masked men he called em. Like they was banditos from them old stories. Says the man dropped a note and some coin on him, so he lets em pass. Told me the two masked guys gave him the willies sumthin bad. Says the moved and sounded kinda funny. I guess
one of em looked his way and he dammed near pissed himself. Said whatever it was they was speaking, wasn't no language he ever heard before.....only thing he could make out was 'big brother'.
So I ask him what the note said, he tells me........... "no trouble."
Stan Garv
1st shift
North Gate
Senior Wall Jockey
Another figure and bike. A little bit of cussing here so skip to the figures if a couple of f-bombs offends ya.
What can I say? You see a white uniform and you know you're ^^^^ed. They must of thought of that when they chose em. Even their name is meant to to intimidate. VRF......violent response force. Can't imagine trying to keep them ^^^^s looking half way white around here. It's not so much the blue lights and sirens, that just makes you turn to look. It's that white ^^^^ing uniform that hits you like a spot light. You don't really worry when a brown or a grey shows up. You can talk or bribe your way out of that........................ but you see that white uniform cutting through the dirt and filth of this city and ya just freeze and start trying to think of anything you might of done wrong. Cause you know when they show up there ain't gonna be no questions. You better startvspittin out confessions or you'll be spittin out teeth, either way you're ^^^^ed.
Law Assurance officers are a joke. Even their brown uniforms reminds you of ^^^^. They're glorified Gate Jockeys that got promoted off the wall and handed a bigger stick. Fat ^^^^ers, can't find one of em without a large order of burger dumplings. Them Filipinos out by West Gate are making a killing......rob that place, and you might see some justice handed down. Hell, it don't take much to bribe a regular LA officer....guess that's why they brought in the Greys.
Greys are a harder lot, some call 'em Tunnel Hounds. They were what used to be the "elite" troops. I guess you gotta be a hard son of a ^^^^^ to go creepin around the underground in that ^^^^ing maze of old transit tubes and sewers. No telling whats still buried down there in the old city. You hardly see those guys around though. they're too busy sniffin out the ferals living in that ^^^^ or the trash trying to find another way into the city.
Wasn't till those loonies out the west gate hooked up with that trio of wanna-be intellectual terrorists that real trouble started. Use to be you'd find the occasional skirmish inside the gates, but once they got organized it all changed. i mean ^^^^-hit-the-fan. the city got bad. Central decided there were no more rules when it came to dealing with trouble. Guess it was bound to happen. Only so much ^^^^ can go down before somethings snaps. Next thing ya know there's these white suited para military types tearin ass through the city on the craziest looking bikes I've ever seen. Some crazy stuff straight out of the old days. Not one of em looks the same. We haven't seen that kind of science 'round here since the big war. some real fancy tech. if you ask me they got some something going on in that big ass building with all those guards around it that you ain't suppose to see out the South Gate.
I'll tell you this, whatever kinda tech they got, i bet i know how they get it. ^^^^s got the Brother's Grime written all over it.
Boogs
South Wall Area
street dealer
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