Pitu's Demo Reel Intro WIP

[p!tu]

Thought i showed you guys where my intro is at!! any Feedback appreciated!!!

It was all made in After Effects

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[Batty]

Great. Except why does it say "Demo Peel"?

 

[Chapter 2099]

Looks great P!tu!

 

[Jen]

Cool effects P!tu! You need a nice funky tune for the music.

 

[Chapter 2099]

Cool effects P!tu! You need a nice funky tune for the music.

Yes, definitely. Music P!tu. Add some music!

 

[Reinhardt]

looks great so far bro!!!!

 

[p!tu]

Great. Except why does it say "Demo Peel"?

the R right leg is really light so in Crapy YT quality you cant see it!

 

[creecher]

Crappy is right. To me it reads Deno Poo!

It looks okay though. Defo needs a soundtrack.

 

[TOE]

I think you can do better, man. Great job, though.

 

[TOE]

That intro does not tell me or the audience what your general topic is about. From the intro, all I am gathering is a guy dancing in front of a spinning wheel or a huge eye.

 

[Batty]

That intro does not tell me or the audience what your general topic is about. From the intro, all I am gathering is a guy dancing in front of a spinning wheel or a huge eye.

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[Jen]

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[p!tu]

That intro does not tell me or the audience what your general topic is about. From the intro, all I am gathering is a guy dancing in front of a spinning wheel or a huge eye.

The general topic is PITUS DEMO REEL.

 

[TOE]

To be honest, the video of you punching the ground is a better intro if your website is about video graphic effects.

 

[p!tu]

To be honest, the video of you punching the ground is a better intro if your website is about video graphic effects.

my website will be about Pituvision.


thisis all for my demo. you know what a demo is? cause im not sure you do.

 

[TOE]

Thought i showed you guys where my intro is at!! any Feedback appreciated!!!

you're welcome ?

 

[p!tu]

you're welcome ?

Relative feedback. not somebody telling me that This intro doesnt send the massage of what they are going to watch when it clearly says DEMO REEL on it. i need feedback to make this better thats it papo. if you dont know what this is they its ok. plus talking about my website without knowing what it is is not good feedback.

 

[TOE]

Then you may want to inform everyone what your website is about by giving more information in your first post. "Demo reel in your intro" allows me to view your video just as it is. Viewing your short clip tells me it is about a guy dancing with fancy video graphics. Your intro should initially tell the audience what the website is about just by watching the intro

 

[CelticPredator]

I like it. Its an intro to all your videos. It doesnt need a topic point.

 

[p!tu]

Then you may want to inform everyone what your website is about by giving more information in your first post. "Demo reel in your intro" allows me to view your video just as it is. Viewing your short clip tells me it is about a guy dancing with fancy video graphics. Your intro should initially tell the audience what the website is about just by watching the intro

I never mentioned my website or have mentioned my website in any demo reel videos Thus why i tell you if you dont know what this is ask fisrts before trying to tell me what wrong or bad.