No personal offense to that reviewer, but I don't see how you can both sound like you're on a script and also ramble on for over 20 minutes.
A good video length for the various metrics is like 10 minutes, and a 10 minute review is still the equivalent of taking the scenic route.
20 minutes - without a clear view of the entire figure, awkward posing, and wrong weapon handling - is really excessive.
I know he likes toys, but there's definitely a clear shift from when he seemed to just do it for fun with his kids versus realizing he had the advantage of getting figures in hand early so he could get videos up before others which is important for monetization.