In my opinion I do think this revision is an improvement (nose and jaw looks slimmer), although his jawline is still too square and pronounced, if you reduce that It'll elongate the face. And something just seems off with the eyes, I think he should be looking straight forward, right at you, goading you on.
Also what I truly think is happening is that the sculpt is lacking personality, he's like an actor without spark. I'm missing Fords trademark crooked grin if you know what I mean, specially if your going for the scoundrel/smuggler look.