Yeah it was not good. It all had a weird tone. Don't know if some of that tone was intentional, so the audience feels something is wrong and the New Republic is not what it seems etc but for me, they failed in execution.
The female ex-officer was so weird throughout, with her goofy smiling etc. She came off hyper fake. Of course, there's a reason for that and I instantly didn't trust her, but the actress went too far. Massively over played it.
Then the clunky weird dialogue throughout.
Pretty much every characters acting was appalling in that middle section. The Mon Cal character was particularly crap.
If I ever rewatch this season, I'll only watch the opening 5 mins or so of this episode.
There were some bits that had potential; the Empire like bureaucratic elements of the NR, the waybtheh refer to them as numbers, the elite not really noticing the difference between the Empire and the NR, the operation paperclip like Amnesty program etc etc, but the execution was so ham-fisted.
Imagine what this episode would have been had it been directed by Gilroy.