The writing in the OT is definitely as bad as the PT in parts. The OT just has the luxury of those lines being delivered by a much stronger cast.
We laugh at the redundancy of "I wish I could wish away my feelings" but how about "Its as if millions of voices suddenly cried out in terror, and then were suddenly silenced." So you're saying a lot of things suddenly happened, and then more things suddenly happened. Suddenly.
But its Sir Alec so we barely notice.
Or how about a quip from one of IrishJedi's favorite scenes of the saga, "That's why you couldn't destroy me before...." Destroy me? Who says that?
Hayden would have been crucified for making such utterances.