Honestly had no intention of doing this but somehow I found myself doing some redrawing. If you save these to your computer you can open them in a photo-browser and cycle back & forth to see the alterations....for whatever it's worth. Not necessarily perfect but I'm going to say certainly better.
ORIGINAL
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A-DEV EDIT
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- pulled the face down below the nose (nose and mouth were too close together)
- redrew upper lip to look more like the above movie reference
- narrowed face at the cheekbones and temples
- adjusted hairline on temples and made forehead taller
- reduced mid-forehead crease
- changed hair silhouette (because of course I had to)
- adjusted sunglasses - possibly still a bit sticky uppy on top corners
- gave him eyebrows just above the sunglasses rims
- somewhat redrew the nose to look less bulbous (tricky that, I'm no expert on light and shade so I probably haven't nailed it)
- had to add a bit of thickness to neck (on one side only per this particular photo and angle)
credit to
@EndoSickness regarding upper lip and nose - I initially didn't see those as being wrong, I was focused on the general shape of his face/head
credit also to
@Dave_W for his useful image comparison - and he also noticed the bulbous nose