Yes, the writing/editing of their interaction could have been better. Maybe I should rewatch it again, but I didn't think he was telling her anything she didn't already know or suspect (I thought her owl friend was symbolic of her knowing he came from the town). I thought it was supposed to be more of a quick "Where is he going with this & have I read him wrong?" kind of reaction - i.e., she just said she wouldn't train Grogu - would he now kill her, collect his reward and try to find another Jedi?
I watched again to see if I was being a *&^% about it.
Well, at first I think she logically thought this was just another of the Magistrate's guys, then she thought, based on his explanation, that he was there just because Bo-katan had sent him, but THEN she's told Mando actually got a direct commission to take her out, which she hadn't known, or that Mando had spoken directly to the Magistrate. Which is a lot more disconcerting I think, knowing a Mandalorian had been offered a commission, than the usual grunt soldier. Which IMO actually works as Aksoka knows what Mandalorians are capable of. Would a pulse rifle disintegrate a Jedi?
But it's clumsy muddled writing IMO that's plot service vs. someone sitting down and thinking how all this would *realistically* flow.
Like telling Din D'jarin to cool his heels at some temple for who knows how long, because one of the most awful, but hilarious
, bits for me was "well, they're aren't many Jedi left". Which was supposed to be sad and tragic. But srsly, then how long is he supposed to hang out there then anyway? What happens if nothing happens? (it will, but in theory Mando could be sitting around like that knight in Indiana Jones waiting for someone to show up.) Plus IMO the directing sucks, 'coz Mando just blandly accepts all of this without losing it. Guess he's just overwhelmed with the mystery of it all.
OK, guess I am supposed to INTERPOLATE that the plan is Baby beams his thoughts into the Force, and some random Jedi
Luke Skywalker gets wind of it, and starts tracking Mando for 10 seasons, but it still doesn't cover how long is Mando supposed to sit around in some ruined temple
. For all he knows, the kid could be thinking "this is really boring. My butt hurts from sitting on this cold rock. I'm hungry and sure wish I had some frog eggs. Or a frog. Can we go back to Sorgon now?"
IMO tho there IS a lot of good, like Mando sitting with the kid, Biehn, visually spectacular and great set/atmosphere. And I guess I can look forward to a visit to some creepy temple rubble which is always fun
. The owl was a nice touch. And the white light sabers against the murk were very, very cool
. And the guy who puts his hands up and runs way from Ahkosa was funny, even it that kind of thing has been done before. The bell getting sliced and falling - good stuff. Plus I can look forward to spending more money on the blackened armor version of Mando with the diecast spear.