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There was nothing. I've seen that movie twice. I just see scenes that have the look, and idea of being emotional. But there's nothing there, because we don't know a thing about the characters.
Don't start show your main hero 33 years later, emotionless, speechless on a boat for some reason. You get nothing from that, and you ruined your introduction.
Don't start show your main hero 33 years later, emotionless, speechless on a boat for some reason. You get nothing from that, and you ruined your introduction.