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Super Freak
I think it could be a lot worse, dude. XD I think mine looks fine, like I said, he's just lacking in the pecs and lats.
And delts, they are flat as pancakes.
They should have more shape to them like the proto, look at the right shoulder here, it really bulges out.
Regardless, lacking the pecs and lats is the reason why he looks so dam small, and the AOU one looks so big.